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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
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Fire to Ashes  [13+]
A dark to light story
by Joy
Review of Fire to Ashes  
Review by Kit
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Joy ,

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Overall Impression:

This is a very interesting story, dear Joy. It is mysterious and reflective. It also leaves some room for interpretation, which I enjoyed.

I think most of us can relate to wishing for an existence of love and peace, free of pain and anxiety, where all of our wishes come true - whatever they may be. For most of us this remains a hope - something to be found one day, if we are fortunate, after our life here on this planet. Others are more willing to take matters into their own hands - no matter how drastic these actions might be.

If you are so inclined, you are vulnerable to false promises. That is what happens to the main character of the story. He allowed himself to be deceived, and he pays for it many times over...

As said, this is very interesting and inspired. A good read!

Suggestions:

I do have a couple of suggestions, dear Joy. I hope that you will find them helpful!

Paragraph 2:

*Snow2* as if it was the enemy

'was' should be were.

Paragraph 3:

*Snow2* shining of iridescent

'of' should be with.

My Rating:

This is a creative piece, offering food for thought. I enjoyed the read.

I did have a couple of suggestions, but nothing major. Therefore, I will give this item a rating of 4.5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work.

Write on!

Kit

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