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What a fun read! Found this on the Online Authors sidebar. I never know what to expect when reading things, mostly because I forget to look at the genres. I see you marked this as Comedy, so that should give a hint as to the ultimate goal. I was wondering how dark it would be, and it turned out to be something quite amusing and cheerful.
Formatting is perfect, with large clear font and the prompt included at the bottom with the word count. The subtitle says it all quite well, without having to bother with a descriptive thought. You’ve set up the suspense and high stakes as we wonder what the nefarious characters are up to. I have nothing to suggest here: it’s my favorite sort of flash fiction, and it’s quite appreciated.
I should try the Flash Fiction Challenge more often, but I have this obsessive thing where everything has to be perfect and well thought out and takes me anywhere from a week to a month to write. I suppose that’s all the more reason to join the challenge… 
Thanks for sharing, take care, and have fun writing 
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