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Web~Witch is living and writing with a passion, surrounded by the picturesque beauty of a quaint New England town in Massachusetts. She is inspired by the gorgeous maples, the rolling hills and the vast sea. As a mother of five children, four daughters and one son, she has learned that life offers many challenges, yet, has found that there is always a path of least resistance. She enjoys every day and what it has to offer. Her dream is to pass along as much positivity as possible to others. Enjoying life to its fullest , laughing, spreading joy and humor and paying it forward is what describes the heart and soul of this woman. Welcome to her little corner of the world. Do enjoy some New England charm and warmth while you are visiting. Ta, WW
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The Stroll Open in new Window. [ASR]
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Your port raid begins, hon *BigSmile* I'll do it over a few days in combination with the 10 Tedious Task reviews for Joy. Not that it matters to you...

Goodness, what a surreal story. I wasn't sure what was going on, as one peculiar thing after another happened. It doesn't quite hold together... I mean, the beginning with the dwarf (is there some more PC medical term?) and the envelope of money doesn't have anything to do with the ending. I'm a little confused.

But I do understand the main point, that a mother wants to hold on for her children. I know I've considered that as a central theme of a thriller kind of story myself. It has a lot of potential.
Anyway, I'm reading this on my phone, so I don't know how you've formatted it. Presumably you're aware of the "size 4 Verdana font" mantra around here.

A spooky story that melds realism and fantasy in a way that reminds us of a great truth of life. I enjoyed reading it and I don't really have much to offer for suggestions.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Heartg*

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