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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
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E-Mail cannot be a curse - not?
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Ah, is this ever relatable. I think everyone on the planet who has an email address knows the feeling of being bombarded with materialistic messages while longing for some kind of real connection to come through the inbox!

You've cleverly employed repetition, building up the different feelings that escalate to sheer exhaustion as you navigate cyber mounds of nonsensical spam that leaves us chuckling at the absurdity of it all.

You've expressed the frustration at not receiving the emails you want or need to see, while being swamped by spam that you carefully and tastefully describe. The lines are well balanced and easy to read, and the occasional rhymes add playfulness to the tone despite the distress.

I use Gmail and I'm quite happy to report that I get almost zero unsolicited spam in my inbox. I do, however, sign myself up for an endless number of newsletter type things, anything from Christian worldview news, to daily Hebrew lessons, to a frustrating amount of daily ads from craft stores and other places I have a membership with.

I've had to clear my subscriptions at least twice in the past couple years... At one point I was throwing out over 100 emails a week! Even now, I'm working with a backlog of news articles and lessons that I should be reading, stretching all the way to last Christmas *Laugh*

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Heartg*

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