Greetings from the House of Mormont!
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Wow, what a story. Brief and touching, yet so simple in the rendering. We see the heartbroken woman, her desire to be a mother, her rescue of the infant and her brave yet startling decision to run away with the baby girl to a new life in Mexico.
I see nothing to correct or change here; this is the kind of flash fiction I’d like to be able to write. I’m curious that it was a weekly prompt; nowadays Arakun hosts her prompts daily, which is quite a feat because she has to get them all judged and posted up by midnight.
That’s a gorgeous award icon, and well deserved… and now I have to figure out how to fill in four hundred more characters  This is the final review of your port raid from me, and I must say it was a lot of fun. I never really stopped by your port for more than a brief glance… and there’s still plenty more to explore. I didn’t have the time or energy to check out the Lou Ryan detective stories, for example.
Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep up the good work - you’re greatly appreciated around here 
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