Hello !

This inspirational writing article of yours was featured in my "read & review" section and I enjoyed it so I decided to give you a review. I hope you benefit from this review and find it encouraging and uplifting. I also hope you continue to enjoy your time on this site. It is a wonderful community of writers.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I loved your inspirational writing article! Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I love what you shared about your family. That's a great attitude to have. You definitely have to believe you can do something in order to have a good chance of doing it.


You're so right about persistence and research too.

It seems like so many people expect things to drop into their laps. It was refreshing to read this article of yours with expectations that people can and will do the necessary work to achieve their dreams.

I am continuing to pray for you and your family. Not really relevant to your article, but that you were in my read and review was a nice reminder to pray for you, so I thought I'd share that God is even using that element of Writing.Com to have people praying for you, your husband and your son.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your inspirational writing article.


Your inspirational writing article was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and soul, and made me want to read your next one. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and heart for other writers and I enjoyed reading your inspirational writing article. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler







Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 



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