JOSE GERVIC LABE, JR.
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Battlefield Open in new Window. [13+]
A poem about war and the struggles of those soldiers searching ways to save their lives.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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As someone whose family has had members serve in the military, this is the sort of things folks tend to worry about. Will father/ mother/ brother/ sister/ uncle/ aunt/ son/ daughter/ whomever come home? Will they be safe and sound? How will they be, when they do return home? Lots of questions occupy the mind during such times.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You could add the Genres Military and Drama to this, instead of using three "Wars".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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