JOSE GERVIC LABE, JR.
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Enough Rizal! Open in new Window. [E]
A poem dedicated to our national hero, Dr. Jose P. Rizal
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a poem dedicated to Dr. Jose P. Rizal, a Pilipino dedicated to getting the locales equal rights. Despite having no military role, folks see him has a hero, for speaking out for the people of the Philippines. It can be interesting learning about other nations Heroes, as it makes you want to learn more about their people.

Thoughts
A nice poem to read. Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Perhaps talk a little bit about the dude himself at the end part - like who he was and what he stood for.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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