Hi GERVIC  ,
I am reviewing your shop, "Magical Express Delivery Wagon"  , in affiliation with "Invalid Item" . Please remember, these are only my opinions, and any advice given is with the sole intention of being helpful.
 Oh, wow. My senses are in overload after reading through your forum page. It is so visually attractive, the pastel colours and beautiful graphics really make this an item it is very hard to ignore. You are so creative. I've stopped by a few times in the past and bought things, but I don't think I've ever read the entire page so closely before. But this morning, I did. And, wow. You have put so much thought into it. I must make some purchases before I hop over to another item.
You have thought of everything for this shop. By that, I mean, you offer every single thing I can think of that we might want to buy for ourselves or others. Merit badges, awardicons, cNotes, reviews, images, trinkets. Okay; last time I say it: wow. And the combinations of different kinds of goodies is fab as well. And, while we're talking about the goodies, the designs on your merit badges are beautiful. I made a silent wish to win the lottery as I was reading this so that I could afford to buy one of everything! Maybe, one day ...
The theme of magic is carried through the whole of the shop. I love your banner with the magic carriage. The image of items being magically bestowed upon people is fab. Your baubles with different images for quick access to each type of delivery is a good idea. There is a lot of information, so it's good that you have links to take you straight to each section. You also have the packages themselves linked for quick access.
I love that you have a place where people can create their own packages. I don't think I've seen this on any other shop around the site. It is unique to this one.
I'm not sure if this is something you need to consider or not, but there is a lot of information on this page. Also, a lot of choice. Which I like. But, also, it makes my mind blow a little. As I read through it, I find myself wanting whatever I am reading, and then reading on and wanting the next package. And this continues, and it makes me not know what I want, trying to figure out what I can afford, and I know that in the past, I've been restricted by time and decided to makeup my mind later. And then I forgot to do it. However, there is nothing that you offer that I would want you to take out. So, I don't know.
Gervic, you are one of the most creative people I know. Your presentation is always beautiful, faultless. And your ideas are engaging and bright. You truly are a valued member of this community.
Happy anniversary!
Choconut
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