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Given: May 14, 2024 at 12:00pm
Length: 1,449 Characters |
1,203 w/o WritingML
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
A poem dedicated to the emotional challenges of making banana bread. It's the endless question - to bake or not to bake?
WHAT I LIKED
This is a fun, lighthearted poem that a lot of people can identify with.
STRUCTURE
This is free form poem. The 1st and 2nd and 3rd and 4th lines rythme in each stanza.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "A speckled friend sat on the kitchen shelf," It's playful and intriguing. It doesn't take the reader long to figure out it's a banana. It's a great visual that one can picture in their imagination and puts the reader in a curious mood.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening engages the reader, venting their curiousity and compelling them to keep reading. The title fits the poem well. The poem is lighthearted and fun.
Review #4751732
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
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