Hello, Gervic!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
Wow! You have clearly put a lot of thought and effort into this amazing Dragon Vale activity! Well done!

You have developed an activity that has me participating literally every single day since I signed up. It's addictive in the best possible way.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day! I went to your port to find something to review and was really surprised to see that I hadn't reviewed this activity of yours already. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

Wow! I know I said that already, but this is one seriously intricate and amazing activity! I love how you are gamifying positive Writing.Com participation with it. I love that I literally earn points every single day for checking in, reviewing, and doing things I would normally do here... and doing more, to get extra points to see my dragons grow.

Speaking of seeing my dragons grow, that is my very favorite part. I can hardly wait to see all of the images of them at every stage in their development and I love the ones I've already received. What an awesome element of this activity!

I can tell by your management of this Dragon Vale activity that you are very talented in graphic design, game development, activity development, administration, interpersonal skills and more. You are also clearly dedicated to the betterment and sustaining of our wonderful writing.com community. You have great community spirit and it shows.

I loved this Dragon Vale activity of yours so much that I fanned it long ago. And I'd fanned you as a writer even before this activity opened. You do many great things here and I appreciate and salute you, Gervic!

I love all the dragon images on your Dragon Vale activity's page and related pages, and that the thumbnail image is similar or the same as the exclusive badge that participants can buy that will double their earned experience points. And that doubling of earned experience points is an excellent incentive, which I suspect has led to a lot more badge purchases (and therefore funds for this excellent activity) than would naturally have happened.

I love that you have so very many ways to add experience points and that you are open to ideas from participants on adding more. I also appreciate that you a have weighted them both in terms of effort to complete and contribution to the site. That's just another of the many ways in which you have put a considerable amount of time, thought and energy into this Dragon Vale activity.

I love that we can see our dragon's rankings through one of the links on the main Dragon Vale activity page.

I appreciate that we can have one post per day instead of having to have a post for each bit of experience earned.

I appreciate that you give us experience points for so many things and even tally some of them yourself, such as our monthly reviewer rankings and monthly scroll game contributions.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your Dragon Vale activity's page.

I thought the genres you selected were perfect for this Dragon Vale activity of yours.

I could go on and on about your Dragon Vale activity, but I've got to wrap up this review before my computer time is over for the day. I hope you feel appreciated and know that I really love this fabulous dragon-themed activity of yours!


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's amazing as it is.


CONCLUSION:
You have a great strategic mind, writing style and generous heart and I love being your friend here and participating in your various activities and contests, especially this Dragon Vale activity. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, love for Writing.Com and dragons, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler













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