Hello, Princess Megan!
INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
You wrote a lovely blog post about what moments of beauty mean to you.
You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.
MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:
Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this blog post when you first wrote it but wasn't able to review it then. I'm glad I was able to come back before your anniversary month was over and review it now. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.
You engaged my senses and emotions as I read this blog post of yours. I could picture the scenes and events and images and feelings of happiness and joy and love.
You did a great job of defining moments of beauty and sharing some lovely ones from your own life. I loved all the concrete, beautiful examples you shared.
I loved your thumbnail picture for your blog and the lovely bridal image in the post itself. They both brought more color and life to your post. I liked that the bridal image reflected the wedding day beautiful moment too.
These are two of my favorites too: "People who hug you and love you. Seeing animals play and looking at how beautiful they are." If I remember correctly, you have a cat named Bella and she's a real cutie. I share my home with two cats and love watching them play too. And, of course, I love hugging my husband.
I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your moments of beauty blog post.
I thought the personal genre was perfect for this moments of beauty blog post of yours.
IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!
CONCLUSION:
You have a personable writing style and I greatly enjoyed reading your moments of beauty blog post.
Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, ideas, and writing with the Writing.Com community!
May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler
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