Greetings,
A cute chapter in a romance saga. You have all the elements of a good story and then some: likable characters with internal and external conflicts, love and snuggles, adventures, mishaps, misunderstandings, and questions that make us wonder what happens next. I may drop by your port to see the rest of the story. It reminds me a little bit of Snoopy’s attempt at the Great American Novel: “It was a dark and stormy night. Suddenly, a shot rang out. The maid screamed. A door slammed. Suddenly, a pirate ship appeared on the horizon!”
But honestly, there’s nothing wrong with that at all. It was a fun read.
Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing
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You responded to this review 06/10/2024 @ 2:48pm EDT |
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