Hi Smee
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Positives
I enjoyed this poem. It felt like reading one of those American tall tales that relays the folklore around a particular legend. I thought the structure of the poem was great and it was an effortless, entertaining read.
Suggestions
I don't have any specific suggestions for improvement.
Overall
This was a fun, enjoyable poem to read. Nicely done!
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