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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
Review #4759226
Viewing a review of:
Everyday Canvas   [18+]
Second blog -- answers to an ocean of prompts
by Joy
         Review for entry/chapter: "A Book's Popularity Doesn't Insure Quality
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Invalid Item*CakeP*



Hello, Joy!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

*Bulletg* I enjoyed reading your take on this blog prompt!

*Bulletg* Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

*Bulleto* You did a much better job than I would have. I had a one word answer (all), and figured that didn't merit a whole blog post, so I skipped that day. *Smile* You clearly put a lot more thought into yours, yet you said almost what I would have (just better!) had I given it more thought. I agree with you wholeheartedly.

*Bulleto* I love how you value your time and keep priorities in mind. "I'm now very careful with how I spend my hours." Some people may be careful with some hours, but few are careful with their leisure / reading hours. You are wise!

*Bulleto* You are also very kind! Even though you are careful with your time, because you are such a great lover of Writing.Com, you are willing to dedicate that precious commodity to your fellow writers here. *Heart*

*Bulleto* I didn't realize that scammers could use reviews to target people. That's terrible. I did know that scammers create false reviews (good and bad, depending on their goal) and think that's terrible too.

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your blog post.

*Bulleto* I thought the genres you selected were perfect for this blog post of yours, and for the blog in general.

*Bulleto* I think I mentioned it before, but just in case I didn't, I love your blog's thumbnail picture.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think your writing is wonderful as it is. Well done! *Clap*

There is one tiny little possible typo though. I think there's an extra period in this sentence: "I can only buy it in e-bay or Amazon's used books for about $45., which I stay away from." It's right after the $45, before the comma. Though maybe somewhere that's the way it's done? I usually just see it as $45, or $45.00, though.


CONCLUSION:
*Bulletv* You have a great writing style and I enjoyed reading your thoughtful blog post.

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, ideas, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

*Bulletv* Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler





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