Well, this is a sad poem. Two parents, full of grief at the loss of their baby daughter, find it difficult to rekindle the passion that they once had. As a result, they end up breaking up. Both are stuck on what had happened, and what could have been. Makes one cry to think about it.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
It would be a good idea to make things internally consistent. It seems to switch from third-person tense to first-person after the first stanza.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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