Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 

Hello, Webbie!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

You have a fantastic page here that is used for fundraising and fun community events and is great for bringing our community together.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end on my first visit and whenever you changed it up.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I couldn't believe that I hadn't reviewed this lovely activity of yours yet so decided this was the thing to review today. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

You engaged my senses with all the colorful badges and lovely images and award badges on your activity's page.

I was happy to see it placed as a winner in 2022 Quill awards. Congratulations! That's an amazing achievement and wonderful nod from our community that they really appreciate this activity of yours.

I loved that your thumbnail picture for this activity of yours is a stylized version of your fun name here. It adds flair and interest to the page's header, which probably helps keep people's interest.

I loved the variety of options you offered for the last fundraiser you did here.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your activity's page.

I thought the genres you selected were perfect for this activity of yours.

As much as I enjoy whatever you are currently offering on this activity page, I'm always looking forward to the next one too. You are excellent at keeping things fun and interesting.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness (and because of the rules of Tour de Ports review challenge I'm in require that, I have a suggestion to make your piece stronger. I'm having to dig deep for this as I really thought your piece was well done as it is though. So if you want to skip this part, no worries at all! Just move on to the next section and know that I enjoyed your activity page.


The only thing I can think of, and I'm not sure that it's needed, but, as I said, I have to offer at least one suggestion, would be to offer a really low-priced badge (perhaps a community one in the theme of your sale) for folks, especially newbies, who might not be able to afford the more expensive options. Right now your page indicates that your last offering included badges at 60K, 80K and 210K. I think a less expensive option could appeal to get you more donors, and maybe in future years they could afford the more expensive options. Just a thought. I do intend only ever to help!



CONCLUSION:
You have a great sense of style and love of our community and it shines through in this lovely activity of yours.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler







Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group"