Greetings, Max Griffin 🏳️🌈! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniversary Review Team and today is your 17th Writing.com Anniversary.
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.
The Positives/What I Liked
I love listening to the fiddle in the original lyrics! In fact, I taught myself how to play the fiddle about a dozen years ago or so, but can only play simpler tunes.
The words you've written to replace the original lyrics are amazing!!! I read through this with the tune in my head and they fit perfectly.
I love how this begins...
The devil went down to Georgia, he was lookin' for some votes to steal
He was in a bind 'cause he was way behind
And he was willin' to make a steal.
What a great way to start!
Suggestions/Comments to Consider
No suggestions. Great work!
Final Thoughts
I enjoyed this very much! Thanks for sharing. Happy Anniversary, Max!