Hello, Max!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
Wow! You wrote a fantastic writing point of view essay that is probably the best piece on point of view that I've read anywhere (on or off of Writing.Com).

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I know I hardly ever do reviews for you but I do appreciate and admire your writing all year long. Even more, I appreciate your friendship and am thankful for your volunteering at Habit Heroes and all over Writing.Com. You're a fantastic friend and excellent community moderator and member. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

I especially loved this statement of yours: "Readers are the author's partners and, together, author and reader create the fictional world."

I agree. Third person is a lot easier. I still like first person for some kinds of stories but it is harder and less flexible too.

In my head, I yelled, "Yes!" when I read this part of your excellent essay: "Your readers don't want to read your diary, they want to experience your story holistically, the way they experience the real world." Good use of bold font for this too, on the repeat. And it was worth repeating. I should probably write it on an index card for when I'm writing ficiton and prop it on my desk. Not that I write a lot of fiction, but I read a lot. And I wish more authors understood this.

I loved your whole essay and wish I'd known to read it ages ago. I especially appreciated your concrete examples (and that you made them green so they stand out from the rest of the essay).

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your writing point of view essay.

I thought the writing genre you selected was perfect for this writing point of view essay of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and if you aren't already a teacher, I think you'd make a great one.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, knowledge, experience, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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