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I am a 40 year old married mother of two teenage boys. I live for writing, especially romance. Love the happily ever after scenerio. The best thing about writing for me is the ability to lose yourself in your work, and feel as if you've accomplished something great. At the end of the day, that's all that really matters.
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 Vic's Escapade Open in new Window. [13+]
Vic's suspicion leads to something unexpected
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings,

I see you wrote this for the Flash Fiction Challenge a while back. You’ve used the prompt words creatively to write a fun and engaging story with just enough tension to keep us reading. I love flash fiction, it’s like fast food; easy to read and quick to get over with. The situation is tense yet absurd as we end with Vic wondering how he’ll get out from hiding behind the guy’s car… *Laugh*

I can’t think of anything to suggest for improvement here; you’ve got good formatting, three genres, and a story that has essential elements of conflict, humor and whatever.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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