Greetings, Sunny!
I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge. I love the bright, cheerful and conversational tone of this poem. It suits the birthday theme well and reminds us all why we love WdC so much. I too am excited to see what lovely fun is in store for us as the month begins.
I find it so appropriate that the celebration of WdC's founding is in September, during a month of growth, change and maturation. We take time to come closer as a community and count the blessings of why we're here and the benefits we all reap from our mutual participation.
Your free verse is free indeed, drawing us along with sentences which carry through lines and create an easy, prose-like reading experience. As a warm and heartfelt expression of love to the site we are all using right now, I have nothing to suggest by way of improvement.
Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing 
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 You responded to this review 08/30/2024 @ 10:55am EDT |
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