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How Pumpkin Spice Came to Be  [E]
The discovery of Pumpkin Spice and everything autumnally nice.
by tj ~ HiLo Silver - Away!
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#4775152
Review by Cubboo!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Invalid Item" *CakeP*


*Tulipp* Greetings, tj ~ HiLo Silver - Away!! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniversary Review Team, and this is your anniversary month! BTW, where have you been??? It's not the same without you! *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I really thought this was true till I read that note at the end! *Sob* This story is fictional, I make no claims to the origins of Pumpkin Spice.
         *Bulletg* What a fun story though! Thanksgiving at a cabin heated with firewood, and pumpkin pie for dessert! Yum! Mixing the pie filling in the coffee decanter was a brilliant idea. And then the leftover mix, gone unnoticed, getting mixed with the coffee was also brilliant! Have you actually tried this? Just curious. *Wink*
         *Bulletp* I enjoyed this little story very much!
         *Bulletb* My favorite was: “It tastes like autumn,” I replied. Love it!


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         Paragraph 10: she called me an asked if *Right* she called me and asked if an = and


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         Excellent (and believable!) writing! Again, Happy WDC Account Anniversary! And you'd better be coming back soon, ya hear??? *Smile*

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Have a great day and...*Quill*
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My writing doesn't follow any set genre, it's interdependent of my mood and all that's taking place in life. I'm still finding myself, what I write constitutes the markers along the path of that journey. With time, many things will manifest in my work and perhaps I will pursue one or two genres. For now, it's not, "What type of writing is my passion?" "Writing is my passion."