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The Ice Princess is concerned--the Arctic ice is melting. She has concerns that she needs to answer. Polar bears--good; humans--bad. Apparently she believes humans are the cause of the melting. Estranged from her sister, the Snow Princess, she swallows her pride to meet with her sister and come up with a solution to both their problem.
Your story is Part 1. Thus, this part basically sets the stage for future stories regarding the subject of Global Warming. There are not potential solutions offered in this episode; perhaps we'll see those solutions in subsequent parts. The two sisters realize they must work together.
I found your tale written in the manner of a children's story. The grammar seemed very basic. Perhaps this is your intent. In that case, well done. But you list your item as Fantasy and Mythology; Children's is not listed.
May I suggest you read your story out loud. Some aspects don't flow easily to me as a reader. I believe you'll hear those spots while reading mush easier than just reading silently.
Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.
One mispelling: Artic should be Arctic.
Watch how you place written thoughts. For example the following ones don't really belong together. The Ice Princess wasn't happy. The Artic was melting and she had saved her polar bears from drowning. It sounds like she's unhappy at saving the polar bears ... which is not the case.
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