Hello, TJ ~ HiLo Silver - Away / callmetj!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

Wow. You are taking on quite the project! I'd have no idea how to go about repairing all that.

Your writing kept me interested and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I read this blog post of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "September" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I read and enjoy your blog all year, though I tend to mostly do anniversary reviews lately. Your camper adventures remind me of a friend and her husband's camper adventures. They bought two with water damage, one unknowingly, and the other knowingly, figuring they'd learned what they needed to from the first one, but it seems there's always more to learn, at least for them. You sound more knowledgeable and I wish you every success with the testing an repairs!

I can't imagine letting the kids use a camper for a playhouse and not bothering to close the windows for two winters! At least you know the story though. That helps with repairs, I imagine. And it seems like the cheapest camper price possible? I'm not in the camper market so I have no idea.

My favorite line was: "Then, I'll start remodeling the inside a little at a time." That's smart. One step at a time, as your time and energy and resources allows. Good luck!

I wanted to hear more about the rabbit hutches. Well, more about the rabbits. Do you raise them? I love rabbits. I have not personally had one as a pet but one of my brothers did and I got to pet it all I wanted. He was a very nice bunny.

It's been a long time since you've updated your blog. I hope you'll be back soon to fill us in on how things are going since your last few news feed posts. I hope you are okay! I hope you're just busy and will be back to writing.com once things settle down.

I thought the personal and writing genres you selected were perfect for this blog post (and overall blog) of yours.

If you ever decide to start a YouTube channel, I suspect that people would enjoy watching your repair process on various projects, including your new-to-you camper. Also, you might enjoy the "Rusty Judgment" channel by Tom Madsen there (I have a bunch of friends who are fans of it). Maybe not though. You might know more than he does and hopefully you're more careful.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!

I think this sentence has a little typo: "In sort, I will likely need to rebuild the section behind the door and possibly the back wall." I think you meant "short" instead of "sort." It'd be an easy fix, should you agree and decide to do so. And if not, no worries at all.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your blog post, and am impressed with your fix-it skills.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, ingenuity, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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