Hello, Kenzie!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

Thank you for sharing this excellent news with us via your blog post!

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

Wow, what an amazing and wonderful piece of news! Praise the Lord that your tumor has shrunk so significantly! I am joining you in prayer that it will "be almost impossible to find" by your next appointment next month!

I appreciated that you translated the centimeters to inches for us. Even though we all probably learned to convert from one to another in school, it's very convenient to have it clearly stated. It makes it faster and easier to picture.

Yay for the Lord hearing our prayers and the medication and prayers working. I think your faith helps too, as well as your determination to have a positive outcome.

I admire your positive outlook and love that we are sisters in Christ.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your blog post.

I thought the Writing, Experience, and Inspirational genres you selected were appropriate for this blog post (and overall blog) of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

Really, the only improvement I can think to make would be to include a picture of some kind. Maybe your happy face, if you're feeling especially brave.



CONCLUSION:
I really enjoyed reading your blog post, and rejoiced with you regarding your great news.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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