Hi Web Witch,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It poses a direct question to the reader that catches their attention right away, but it tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic by describing RFID's and one of their uses. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about RFID's and how potentially destructive they can be if used widely. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The reader is, also, delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an aggressive style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.