Greetings, Sunny!
I’m here as a fellow member of the PPC5 project.
A fun, honest and open free verse poem dealing with the subject at hand. You treat it almost as a journal entry, with a casual and chatty tone. We see you get excited about some of the foods you love, and by the end of it we can agree that yes, there are far too many delicious foods in the world to simply pick one.
I like the free flowing style you’ve chosen; it was easy to read. Where you say “from steak to Italian” you spelled “too” instead of “to.” The sentences kind of run together, but this is a whimsical stylistic choice and I wouldn’t critique it as such 
Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing 
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