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I am a 40 year old married mother of two teenage boys. I live for writing, especially romance. Love the happily ever after scenerio. The best thing about writing for me is the ability to lose yourself in your work, and feel as if you've accomplished something great. At the end of the day, that's all that really matters.
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 Election Open in new Window. [E]
My take on 2024
by Purple Holiday Princess Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, Purple Holiday Princess! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. and you have posted previous to me. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* My Thoughts

I cannot WAIT for this election to be over with. *Facepalm* I am so sick of the campaign ads. I just have to shake my head at what I hear at times!

Your poem says a lot in only 16 lines/72 words!

My favorite lines are:
Morals they truly lack.
For it is all a game,
They should hide in shame.



*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         Politicians greedy fights, *Right* Politicians' greedy fights,
         Striping away more rights. *Right* Stripping away more rights.


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         I've already sent my ballot in. I'm DONE. *Laugh* Best of luck in the contest! Nice work.

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Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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Angel with Pumpkin


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