Greetings,
I'm reviewing as a fellow member of the Promptly Poetry challenge.
You've handled the form well, weaving together an autumnal tale of a deer that escapes the hunter's bow. I don't believe in hunting myself, but I appreciate the feeling you've cultivated here, of the changing seasons and the timelessness of one moment frozen in stories passed down at the fireside.
I know forms can be frustrating, but I found this particular form to be much easier to write to than I was afraid of. It takes patience and care, but it's not impossible. You've done good here.
I would recommend adding two additional genres to the item so it can be found easily when browsing and also to ensure as many opportunities for Quill Award nominations as possible. You could use "Nature," "Environment," or "Animal."
Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing 
 My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!"  .
 You responded to this review 11/02/2024 @ 7:06am EDT |
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