 My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
 THE POEM
The poem spoke to a night in a lover's bed.
 WHAT I LIKED
I like the concept of the heat of passionate that a cool dark night could evoke.
 STRUCTURE
This is a free form poem. There is no set rythme scheme, though there are rythmes.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to change font and make easier to read on the website.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Sweet yet wild, a flying dove, taste of love, oh so real." This description implies a lot - a sweet love, that soars to new heights, tangible and real.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The title is a interesting choice for the poem and it conflicts with the heated tone the contents set. Nice juxtaposition.
Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army
 You responded to this review 11/10/2024 @ 4:00pm EST |
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