Greetings and happy holidays!
Ah, I noticed this Writer's Cramp prompt the other day (was it only yesterday?) And now I find your story from it, written with loving care.
You have captured the warmth of Christmas spirit here, with the eager boy Noah generously and thoughtfully preparing snacks and a helpful gift for Santa. It becomes a tradition each year which they both look forward to.
Your characters are drawn brightly and clearly, with the predictable good humor of Santa Claus bounced off against the surprise of a pickle sandwich. This doesn't come across as dull or cliche at all, and is a wonderful holiday story which I found in my quest for such in order to complete "12 Days Of Christmas 2024"  .
I'd love to explore your port sometime soon 
Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing 
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