Review of Kleenex Confessionals

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Kleenex Confessionals

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Inspired by a Kleenex commerical - a man struggles to find his role as a father again.
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Review of Kleenex Confessionals

Review by Amethyst Snow Angel

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Rated: 18+

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Greetings, Kiya!

Good grief, what a monologue. I was absorbed in the dynamics revealed in the man’s words as he painted the colorful picture of his background, rise and the crumbling of his family. It’s amusingly (also sadly) realistic; as someone who leads a quiet and sheltered life, I don’t know too much about the “ways of men” and quite frankly would rather not, but that’s just me

You’ve captured his voice so distinctly and clearly, taking what could have been a simple and trite theme and turning it into a fun and engaging read.

Did you use default font size? I prefer bigger… Size 4 Verdana as I used to say frequently. Other than that, this was interesting and well crafted.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing