About This Author
A changeling spirit,
constantly evolving,
revolving around an inner core,
spinning forth legend and lore,
stories and lives
as I come to grips
with who and what I am,
have been and may be.
I am a phoenix:
rising ever above and beyond!
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Santa's Last Gift Open in new Window. [E]
Sometimes it is the smallest...
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Fyn

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really liked the structure and the format of this piece. It was well, written, entertaining, and told a great story. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Although that's no surprise when it comes to your poetry! *Wink*


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Jeff is Gru in #2343485 Author IconMail Icon
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