OFFICIAL JUDGE'S REVIEW
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Positives
I enjoyed the individual stories that you wrote for this anthology. I wasn't surprised to find that each story had your trademark flair for character dynamics that made each installment feel realistic and engaging. I also loved your choice of album and the amount of information you provided in why you chose it.
Suggestions
For me, many of the stories felt a little vignette-like, due to their brevity. There's nothing wrong with flash fiction, but the way some of the stories played out, they felt more like standalone scenes rather than complete stories that fully played out with a beginning, middle, and end.
Overall
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed your short story collection this year. It was well written, easy to read, and very entertaining. Nice work!
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