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I spend most of my time playing alpha female for my pack of dogs. Lucy (Boston terrier), Harley (chihuahua). Hershey (miniature dachshund) and Jasper (standard schnauzer) are my entertainment and sometimes muses. Jasper is a puppy mill rescue dog and I'm in the intital stages of writing a series of vignettes of his life since the rescue contrasted with eduaction about rescues and puppy mills. I do actually have other interests than writing and my dogs. I love to scrapbook, watch ice hockey, listen to a variety of music genres and reading. My parents both were avid readers and passed that love on to me. I'll read a cereal box if you set it in front of me!
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Springtime ritual on the Oklahoma prairie.
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*Reading* THE POEM

The poem was about the circle of nature and natural life on the prairie.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poet used a good economy of words to paint vivid pictures of nature and it's cycle.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme. It has a nice cadence when read aloud.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to augment the presentation of the poem.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Black cloud, rotates overhead, rumbles and crackles,roars and swirls." I could easily picture this occurring in real time as I read. It put me in the moment as a reader.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is a nicefit for the poem. Nice expression. Well done.

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