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I spend most of my time playing alpha female for my pack of dogs. Lucy (Boston terrier), Harley (chihuahua). Hershey (miniature dachshund) and Jasper (standard schnauzer) are my entertainment and sometimes muses. Jasper is a puppy mill rescue dog and I'm in the intital stages of writing a series of vignettes of his life since the rescue contrasted with eduaction about rescues and puppy mills. I do actually have other interests than writing and my dogs. I love to scrapbook, watch ice hockey, listen to a variety of music genres and reading. My parents both were avid readers and passed that love on to me. I'll read a cereal box if you set it in front of me!
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE ESSAY

This is a motivational essay that sets the tone for author's writing goals in 2020.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the honest, introspective look by the author. Sometimes, it's hard to be honest with ourselves, especially if we've let ourselves done, but I like the hopeful tone set in the author's reflections.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is written in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* GOAL SETTING

There's an assessment of 2019 writing goals and goals listed for the upcoming year.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. If anything, I might suggest increasing the font so as to make it easier on the eyes here on WDC.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader using a conversational voice. While an older "Dear Me" essay it hits all the 'high' notes with a motivational tone of voice and realistic goals that could be applied even now.

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