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 Just a Moment of a Morning Open in new Window. [E]
Fine way to start a day.
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Greetings, Fyn!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

I started digging back through old forum entries and found this lovely winter scene. You have captured a beautiful moment, using the prompt words to paint us a unique and thoughtful picture of snowy trees and peaceful quiet in the morning.

The only suggestion I can think of is correcting the spelling of "crescendo." Also, there's that pesky thing of line breaks again... I'm beginning to think we should use the {indent} function to push in the second part of a spillover line... Does that make sense? I'll have to go look at one of my recent poems and see if it needs indents *Think*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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