Review of The Lost Hour

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Kiya is a young woman with many interests. She's got a degree in Computer Science and Registered Nursing.

She's an avid reader and considers Stephen King one of her favorite authors.

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The Lost Hour

[13+]
They needed to get away for a while, yet some things are inescapable.
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Review of The Lost Hour

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Rated: 13+

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Greetings, Kiya, and happy almost birthday!

This is a beautifully sad and touching story about love, aging and memories. You write stories that are always so alive, crafting relatable characters that feel like real people with hopes, dreams and fears.

As a nurse, I suspect you speak from experience with caring for the elderly. I pray I or my own loved ones never have to go through this.

I can’t think of anything to suggest for correcting or editing, except perhaps an asterisk or three for a scene divider, and center it. Formatting is great, and you’ve done just about everything I can think of to make this a great story… also, my iPad is at 7%