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A changeling spirit,
constantly evolving,
revolving around an inner core,
spinning forth legend and lore,
stories and lives
as I come to grips
with who and what I am,
have been and may be.
I am a phoenix:
rising ever above and beyond!
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Dear Fyn Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Time just seems to fly everywhere...like trying to catch beads or grains of sand in your hand...the harder you try to catch them, the more of them slip through your hand.

My Favorite Part(s)

I like the last lines - "until my thread is cut my tapestry grows warmer and more complex...and love as if I've all the tomorrows in the world.

Final Thoughts:

I've read it a couple of times now, and it does strike a chord in me. Live, love, give, as we know not when the thread will be "cut". Thank you for sharing.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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