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I am an amateur writer of novels, serials, and novellas. Most of my work is in the genres of fantasy, mythology, drama, occult, GLBT, and erotica.

As I'm not seeking publication, I offer my work online for free reading. I'm not seeking stylistic critique so much as feedback from people who just like reading what I write. I love hearing what people think of my characters, plots, themes, etc., so if you have any comments or advice on those, feel free to share. I'm not hugely popular and often go many months without hearing from readers so I enjoy all the comments I get!

My interests are Ojibwa mythology, Mackinac Island, Egyptian mythology, Jungian symbolism and dream interpretation, ritual crime, fantasy writing, and various other things you can find in my personal bio, available just to the right. Please click to learn more about me and what I'm looking for in terms of readers and potential friends.

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Return To Manitou Island
TITLE: Return To Manitou Island

GENRES: Fantasy, adventure, drama, mythology.

RATING: 13+

SUMMARY: Almost a year after coming home from her adventure on the magical Manitou Island, Charmian finds herself heartbroken, lonely, and wanting to return...if only the right dream would come. For she has not dreamed about the Island in months, and the last person who seems to have believed her fantastic story is now gone. Grieving and desperate for a change of pace from reality, what can Charmian do? Oddly enough, a gift left by her grandmother...a dreamcatcher...provides her means of returning--and Charmian does so without a qualm. Little does she know that awaiting her on Manitou Island is a force even greater and more evil than the vanquished Ocryana...and there will be lives endangered, dark secrets revealed, and terrible struggles to endure before she can even think of heading home again...

WRITING STATUS: Completed.

WRITING DATE: 2003-2005.

LENGTH: 139 chapters, 605,000+ words.

CONTENT WARNINGS: Fantasy violence, mild adult language, mild adult themes.

COPYRIGHT: This story and all characters, unless otherwise stated in the Disclaimers, are copyright © tehuti_88 and may not be used or distributed without permission. The reader is free to print out or download a copy of this story for offline reading as long as the author's copyright information remains upon it. Please do not distribute; if you wish to share this story, send a link to this page.

DISCLAIMERS: Ocryx and his "species" are © the Haunted Theatre of Mackinac Island. Certain characters such as Manabozho and Glooskap are from Ojibwa and Micmac mythology. Although aspects of this story are loosely based on Ojibwa and Micmac mythology and culture, artistic license has been taken as this is a FANTASY story. Please take note that this story was written between 2003-2005 and that my writing style and understanding of the mythology I created have changed vastly in the meantime.

ADDITIONAL INFO: NA

RELATED STORIES: "Manitou IslandOpen in new Window. (prequel), "Escape From Manitou IslandOpen in new Window. (sequel), "Tales From Manitou IslandOpen in new Window. (short stories)

REVIEW REQUEST: The author greatly appreciates any reviews and comments, as these let me know that people are actually reading. Please do not assume that I must get lots of comments and don't need any more, or that you as a reader have nothing worth saying, as this is not so. Be aware that I am NOT seeking publication for this story, and am not seeking literary criticism to improve my writing style, but am interested primarily in entertaining readers, so comments on plot, characterization, what the reader finds interesting or confusing, etc., are most appreciated. If you have any questions about anything in the writing feel free to ask.

CONTENTS: "Return To Manitou Island: CharactersOpen in new Window. || "Part 1: Darkness AwakensOpen in new Window. || "Part 2: Shattered DreamsOpen in new Window. || "Part 3: The Gateway OpensOpen in new Window. || "Part 4: How Things Have ChangedOpen in new Window. || "Part 5: Back To The TribeOpen in new Window. || "Part 6: The Watchers & The WatchedOpen in new Window. || "Part 7: To The CityOpen in new Window. || "Part 8: The Mad HuronOpen in new Window. || "Part 9: Knight In Shining ArmorOpen in new Window. || "Part 10: Whose Dreams Are These?Open in new Window. || "Part 11: She's Got The PowerOpen in new Window. || "Part 12: Dark RevelationOpen in new Window. || "Part 13: Misses & HitsOpen in new Window. || "Part 14: View From The TopOpen in new Window. || "Part 15: Into The Crooked TreeOpen in new Window. || "Part 16: Fallen ArchesOpen in new Window. || "Part 17: Night ArrivalOpen in new Window. || "Part 18: All Bark & No BiteOpen in new Window. || "Part 19: The Bear's DenOpen in new Window. || "Part 20: Outsider, Looking InOpen in new Window. || "Part 21: Pep TalksOpen in new Window. || "Part 22: The Grand TourOpen in new Window. || "Part 23: Blood TiesOpen in new Window. || "Part 24: Don't Mess With ManitousOpen in new Window. || "Part 25: No Return PolicyOpen in new Window. || "Part 26: Leap Of FaithOpen in new Window. || "Part 27: Follow The Bouncing Pinecone!Open in new Window. || "Part 28: Prisoners Of The Fairy RealmOpen in new Window. || "Part 29: The Secret Of The WolvesOpen in new Window. || "Part 30: Back Through The Fairy ArchOpen in new Window. || "Part 31: Sleeping AidsOpen in new Window. || "Part 32: The Name Of The BeastOpen in new Window. || "Part 33: The Seeds Of HatredOpen in new Window. || "Part 34: Bitter ReunionOpen in new Window. || "Part 35: Pet ProjectOpen in new Window. || "Part 36: Deep In The WoodsOpen in new Window. || "Part 37: PotentialOpen in new Window. || "Part 38: The Old Dog's New TrickOpen in new Window. || "Part 39: InvitationOpen in new Window. || "Part 40: Too Much InformationOpen in new Window. || "Part 41: The Back BurnerOpen in new Window. || "Part 42: ReclamationOpen in new Window. || "Part 43: Back In The Land Of The LivingOpen in new Window. || "Part 44: RealizationOpen in new Window. || "Part 45: Devil's AdvocateOpen in new Window. || "Part 46: Into The ShadowsOpen in new Window. || "Part 47: The Cry From The GraveOpen in new Window. || "Part 48: EchoesOpen in new Window. || "Part 49: PreparationOpen in new Window. || "Part 50: Crossing OverOpen in new Window. || "Part 51: Land Of ConfusionOpen in new Window. || "Part 52: A Thief's WelcomeOpen in new Window. || "Part 53: Secret HideoutOpen in new Window. || "Part 54: The Lair Of The LiarOpen in new Window. || "Part 55: Low SpiritsOpen in new Window. || "Part 56: Hogging All The GloryOpen in new Window. || "Part 57: Old WoundsOpen in new Window. || "Part 58: Fool's BoastOpen in new Window. || "Part 59: Lonely FarewellOpen in new Window. || "Part 60: First ContactOpen in new Window. || "Part 61: All In The HeadOpen in new Window. || "Part 62: DreamlandOpen in new Window. || "Part 63: Severed TiesOpen in new Window. || "Part 64: Booby TrapOpen in new Window. || "Part 65: Crazy GrasshopperOpen in new Window. || "Part 66: Filling The ShellOpen in new Window. || "Part 67: Land Of The BearOpen in new Window. || "Part 68: Pride & PrejudiceOpen in new Window. || "Part 69: In The Out DoorOpen in new Window. || "Part 70: Sleeping BeautyOpen in new Window. || "Part 71: Family ReunionOpen in new Window. || "Part 72: Deal With The DevilOpen in new Window. || "Part 73: Stolen GoodsOpen in new Window. || "Part 74: Pressure RisingOpen in new Window. || "Part 75: The Wicked MirrorOpen in new Window. || "Part 76: Reality, Harsher Than DreamOpen in new Window. || "Part 77: Return Of The Ice ChiefOpen in new Window. || "Part 78: Shelter From The StormOpen in new Window. || "Part 79: Careless GesturesOpen in new Window. || "Part 80: The Road Less TakenOpen in new Window. || "Part 81: Deaf EarsOpen in new Window. || "Part 82: Scott's CaveOpen in new Window. || "Part 83: The Weavers' WebOpen in new Window. || "Part 84: Spirits CrossingOpen in new Window. || "Part 85: Great Minds Think AlikeOpen in new Window. || "Part 86: A Spy In Our MidstOpen in new Window. || "Part 87: Squeezing Water From A RockOpen in new Window. || "Part 88: Somewhere, Over The Arch...Open in new Window. || "Part 89: Road Of SorrowsOpen in new Window. || "Part 90: A Secret, UnearthedOpen in new Window. || "Part 91: Every Little Thing He DoesOpen in new Window. || "Part 92: Promises, PromisesOpen in new Window. || "Part 93: Come & Get Me!Open in new Window. || "Part 94: TransfusionOpen in new Window. || "Part 95: The Second DenialOpen in new Window. || "Part 96: Wrath Of The Ice QueenOpen in new Window. || "Part 97: My Friend, My EnemyOpen in new Window. || "Part 98: Fire-JugglerOpen in new Window. || "Part 99: Fleeing CedarsOpen in new Window. || "Part 100: Wood RunOpen in new Window. || "Part 101: The Lost TribeOpen in new Window. || "Part 102: EvacuationOpen in new Window. || "Part 103: Into The Silent LandOpen in new Window. || "Part 104: The Vision Of The LakeOpen in new Window. || "Part 105: Fallen BrotherOpen in new Window. || "Part 106: Coming ToOpen in new Window. || "Part 107: Return From The RiverOpen in new Window. || "Part 108: My Silent GuideOpen in new Window. || "Part 109: The Secret Of Croghan WaterOpen in new Window. || "Part 110: Bare BonesOpen in new Window. || "Part 111: Shock To The SystemOpen in new Window. || "Part 112: Tough LoveOpen in new Window. || "Part 113: Back To The BluffOpen in new Window. || "Part 114: The Reluctant VisionaryOpen in new Window. || "Part 115: Mind GamesOpen in new Window. || "Part 116: Out Of The Frying Pan...Open in new Window. || "Part 117: PaugukOpen in new Window. || "Part 118: Playing OrpheusOpen in new Window. || "Part 119: Hide & SeekOpen in new Window. || "Part 120: This Way To The EgressOpen in new Window. || "Part 121: The Drowned LabyrinthOpen in new Window. || "Part 122: The Return Of White RabbitOpen in new Window. || "Part 123: Crossed SignalsOpen in new Window. || "Part 124: Burrowers BeneathOpen in new Window. || "Part 125: Heart Of DarknessOpen in new Window. || "Part 126: Family FeudOpen in new Window. || "Part 127: Fear & LoathingOpen in new Window. || "Part 128: Stupid Is As Stupid DoesOpen in new Window. || "Part 129: The Underground ResistanceOpen in new Window. || "Part 130: Counting ChickensOpen in new Window. || "Part 131: A Hatred Like FireOpen in new Window. || "Part 132: Alike, UnalikeOpen in new Window. || "Part 133: A Bitter PillOpen in new Window. || "Part 134: Night & DayOpen in new Window. || "Part 135: Last ActOpen in new Window. || "Part 136: Goodbye, My BrotherOpen in new Window. || "Part 137: RIPOpen in new Window. || "Part 138: FarewellsOpen in new Window. || "Part 139: Always HomeOpen in new Window.



Part 1: Darkness Awakens
An ominous shadow arises over Manitou Island...
Part 2: Shattered Dreams
Charmian mourns an impending loss, and retreats into her dreams...
Part 3: The Gateway Opens
Charmian sets foot upon a vastly changed Island, and gets a few surprises...
Part 4: How Things Have Changed
Charmian pays a pleasant visit, but the greeting she gets in the woods is another story...
Part 5: Back To The Tribe
Charmian meets the unexpected, and heads back to the tribe...
Part 6: The Watchers & The Watched
Charmian learns of more change, unaware that she is being followed...
Part 7: To The City
Charmian and Francois head to town...but what is this that awaits them there...?
Part 8: The Mad Huron
Charmian meets the "Mad Huron"--but is he really that mad...?
Part 9: Knight In Shining Armor
Another new face appears...is this a friend or a foe?
Part 10: Whose Dreams Are These?
Charmian and Tal Natha meet again--but ominous news spoils the reunion...
Part 11: She's Got The Power
Charmian rediscovers something she had thought long lost...
Part 12: Dark Revelation
Charmian learns a shocking secret about an old friend...
Part 13: Misses & Hits
One miss on Charmian's part leads to an unusual hit...
Part 14: View From The Top
A run-in with a rock sets Charmian off on an odd quest...
Part 15: Into The Crooked Tree
Who is this who lives in the Crooked Tree?...and how does Manabozho know her...?
Part 16: Fallen Arches
Charmian goes in search of the Fairy Arch, but doesn't find what she expected...
Part 17: Night Arrival
Charmian spots an odd sight making its way to the Island under cover of night...
Part 18: All Bark & No Bite
What's happened to Charmian's powers--right when she needs them most?!...
Part 19: The Bear's Den
Charmian asks plenty of questions, but answers aren't easy to find here...
Part 20: Outsider, Looking In
Charmian learns something odd, while a trespasser stalks the Island...
Part 21: Pep Talks
Tal Natha voices his worries, while Charmian tries to allay some...
Part 22: The Grand Tour
Charmian takes Thomas on a tour of the Island, with rather startling results...
Part 23: Blood Ties
Thomas has a very good explanation for drinking blood...doesn't he...?
Part 24: Don't Mess With Manitous
Can't those Shadow Wolves go a day without ruining something...?
Part 25: No Return Policy
Charmian learns that giving something back is harder than keeping it...


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